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Hi, everyone! How's it going? Hope you're doing great. Well, today I wanna write a bit about the place where I come from. Basically, I'm from Nagaland, North Eastern part of india. My place is mostly hills and valleys. People are generous and we have l same complexion as Chinese and Japanese. We don't look like an typical Indians. There's lot of people in the world still doesn't aware about my place, hence when I say I'm from India they get confused and I gotta explain them every time however it is fun for me to letting them know my place. 95% of population are Christian. We respect elders that is kind of traditional. I should say people are really brilliant. Western culture has great influence on us. We imitate them in every way. Throughout the year we experience four season such as Summer, autumn , spring and winter. Since most people are Christian we celebrate Christmas significantly, cheerfully and grandly. On the other note, in terms of development we're lacking behind so much from others. We really have to work hard to get in line with the rest of the world. I appreciate it so much for taking out your precious time to read my aweful writing till the end. Please do me a favor by doing corrections of my writing. Drop me a feedback as well. If you're kind enough to do that I'll be very grateful to you. Have a good one.
Jan 18, 2021 11:26 AM
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Hi, everyone! How's it going? Hope you're doing great. Well, today I wanna write a bit about the place where I come from. Basically, I'm from Nagaland, North Eastern part of India. My place is mostly hills and valleys. People are generous and we have the same complexion as Chinese and Japanese. We don't look like typical Indians. There are lots of people in the world still who are still not aware about my place, hence when I say I'm from India they get confused and I gotta explain them every time. However it is fun for me to let them know my place. 95% of population are Christian. We respect elders that is kind of traditional. I should say people are really brilliant. Western culture has great influence on us. We imitate them in every way. Throughout the year we experience four seasons such as Summer, Autumn , Spring and Winter. Since most people are Christians we celebrate Christmas significantly, cheerfully and grandly. On the other note, in terms of development we're lacking behind so much from others. We really have to work hard to get in line with the rest of the world. I appreciate it so much for taking out your precious time to read my aweful writing till the end. Please do me a favor by doing corrections of my writing. Drop me a feedback as well. If you're kind enough to do that I'll be very grateful to you. Have a good one.
You use ' wanna ' and ' gotta ' which are right in American English so I didn't change it. Nagaland is a state with nature's beautiful blessings. I would like to visit it.🙂
January 18, 2021
Hi, everyone! How's it going? Hope you're doing great. Well, today I wanna write a bit about the place where I come from. Basically, I'm from Nagaland, North Eastern part of india. My place is mostly hills and valleys. People are generous and we have l same complexion as Chinese and Japanese. We don't look like an typical Indians. There's lot of people in the world still doesn't aware about my place, hence when I say I'm from India they get confused and I gotta explain them every time however it is fun for me to letting them know my place. 95% of population are Christian. We respect elders that is kind of traditional. I should say people are really brilliant. Western culture has great influence on us. We imitate them in every way. Throughout the year we experience four season such as Summer, autumn , spring and winter. Since most people are Christian we celebrate Christmas significantly, cheerfully and grandly. On the other note, in terms of development we're lacking behind so much from others. We really have to work hard to get in line with the rest of the world. I appreciate it so much for taking out your precious time to read my aweful writing till the end. Please do me a favor by doing corrections of my writing. Drop me a feedback as well. If you're kind enough to do that I'll be very grateful to you. Have a good one.
January 18, 2021
Hi, everyone! How's it going? Hope you're doing great. Well, today I wanna write a bit about the place where I come from. Basically, I'm from Nagaland, North Eastern part of India. My place is mostly located on hills and valleys. People are generous here and we have a very similiar complexion as Chinese and Japanese. We don't look like typical Indians. There's lot of people in the world still, not aware about my place, hence when I say I'm from India they get confused and I gotta explain them every time however it is fun for me to letting them know (about) my place. 95% of population are (here) Christian. We respect elders that is kind of traditional. I should say people are really brilliant. Western culture has a great influence on us. We imitate them in every (possible)way. Throughout the year we experience four season such as summer, autumn , spring and winter. Since most people are Christian we celebrate Christmas significantly, cheerfully and grandly. On the other note, in terms of development we're lacking behind so much from others. We really have to work hard to get in line with the rest of the world. I appreciate it so much for taking out your precious time to read my aweful writing till the end. Please do me a favor by doing corrections of my writing. Drop me a feedback as well. If you're kind enough to do that I'll be very grateful to you. Have a good one.
January 18, 2021
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