Bharti Kataria
On my 10th birthday , i asked my mom that... Should i start growing my hair from today? Then my mom gave me the permission :) I was very happy that day ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ™‚ But after a few days, my mom died due to cancer -- this was my last birthday wish from my mom !!! That's why, it's my favorite childhood memory.
Mar 10, 2021 3:30 PM
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On my 10th birthday, I asked my mom if could start growing out my hair beginning today. Right then my mom gave me the permission! :) I was very happy that day ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ™‚ But a few days later, my mom died from cancer -- this was my last birthday gift from my mom !!! That's why it's my favorite childhood memory.
Beautiful memory and only minor corrections. Your English is very good! Keep it up!
March 10, 2021
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