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111_2109 Could you help me by correcting the text ?【Need For Diet】 I need a diet little bit because l gained weight especially around a belly. Obviously, I’m sure that it’s caused by long-lasting stay home. I have a appointment of a regular medical check next month therefore, I’d like to do something by then. However, it’s tough for reducing my appetite in autumn, because there are many good harvests.😑
Sep 24, 2021 1:38 AM
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To: Brian Patti, Jen Heavener, and Mammuso
Sep 24, 2021 5:35 PM
111_2109 Could you help me by correcting the text ?【Need For Diet】 I need to diet a little bit because l have gained weight, especially around the waist. Obviously, I’m sure that it’s from being at home for so long and not getting out. I have an appointment for a regular medical checkup next month, and I’d like to do something about this before then. However, it’s hard for me to eat less in autumn because there are so many good seasonal foods now.😑
Depending on what you mean, you could replace “around the waist” with “in my stomach”. The 1st means you’ve gotten wider all around whereas the 2nd means your stomach itself is noticeably sticking out more. Either of those is a much more natural phrase than “in the belly”, though that is perfectly understandable. Overall, great job!!!
Sep 24, 2021 2:19 AM
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