Adelina
There is an unmistakable opinion that in order to keep in a good shape a person need to visit a gym. I am deeply convinced that the most important is to have a strong desire to stay fit. To begin with, if people have an aspiration to keep their body in an optimal physical shape they would find a solution how to achieve it. There are some recommendations for these group of people that they can follow, which include to be physical active, keep a balanced diet and have a healthy sleep. These three simple rules will ensure that they are in a good shape without having to go to the gym. However, most of the people usually deny the fact that they can do indoor or outdoor exercises themselves. It is because they are too lazy. They always keep to excuse that they do not have enough time to visit a gym or too hard to give up a junk food. The simple answer is that a person have to have willingness to be fit.
Sep 24, 2021 11:40 AM
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There is an unmistakable opinion that in order to keep in a good shape a person need to visit a gym. I am deeply convinced that the most important is to have a strong desire to stay fit. To begin with, if people have an aspiration to keep their body in an optimal physical shape they would find a solution how to achieve it. There are some recommendations for these group of people that they can follow, which include to be physical active, keep a balanced diet and have a healthy sleep. These three simple rules will ensure that they are in a good shape without having to go to the gym. However, most of the people usually deny the fact that they can do indoor or outdoor exercises themselves. It is because they are too lazy. They always keep to excuse that they do not have enough time to visit a gym or too hard to give up a junk food. The simple answer is that a person have to have willingness to be fit.
As you believe that there may not be a need to go to gym to keep fit, the sentence: "there is an unmistakable opinion ... " does not fit in. Perhaps we can say there is a popular belief that ... Many people believe that .... Unmistakable would mean correct and cannot be proved wrong.
Sep 24, 2021 12:17 PM
Some people have the firm conviction that, in order to keep in good shape, a person needs to visit a gym. I am deeply convinced that the most important thing/element is to have a strong desire to stay fit. First off, if people do have an aspiration to keep their body in an optimal physical shape, they will find a way to achieve that. Some recommendations these people could follow include being physically active, keeping a balanced diet and having a healthy sleep routine. These three simple rules will ensure that they are in good shape without having to go to the gym. However, most of the people usually deny the fact they can do indoor or outdoor exercises themselves. That’s because they are too lazy. They will try to find an excuse, claiming they do not have enough time to visit a gym, or that it’s too hard to give up junk food. The simple answer to all this is that a person needs/has to have willingness/the will to be fit.
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Sep 24, 2021 11:59 AM
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Adelina
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