Wendy
Could you please help me correct these sentences? Thanks The bear likes to sing in the snow. When the sun comes out , the snow melts into water, the bear feels sad. 1. Samuel is a student. He likes painting very much . He is good at painting boats and pigs. They are extremely lifelike. 2. My sister shows her new painting to me . It’s so funny. There is a lovely pig rowing the boat. I love her painting. 3. There is a pig lives on a small boat . He makes a living for painting. His paintings sell well. 1. Mike was watching TV. His mother asked him to stop to do homework . Now, Mike is doing his homework under the tree. 2. We were playing hide and seek in the park . Then we saw a nice TV under a big tree. “Whose is it?” We wondered. We stopped to study the TV. 3. I was swinging under the tree when I heard my favorite TV show was on. Then I stopped to rush into my room. 1. Nancy’s mum gave birth to a new baby in July . The baby is very cute . He has long eyelashes. 2. It’s July. It is hot and stuffy. The little baby sleeps in his cradle for a long time. He is getting fractious and tearful now. 3. Today is July 12th. It is the baby’s one-year birthday. Many relatives come to celebrate his birthday. He gets lots of presents. An uncle with long legs gives him a robot.
Sep 28, 2021 6:45 AM
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Could you please help me correct these sentences? Thanks The bear likes to sing in the snow. When the sun comes out , the snow melts into water, the bear feels sad. 1. Samuel is a student. He enjoys painting in his spare time mainly painting boats and pigs with great attention to detail 2. My sister showed me her new painting of a pig rowing a boat and it was lovely, she has a great attention to detail. 3. On a boat somewhere , there is a pig who enjoys painting and makes a living by selling the paintings 1. After Mike was watching TV all day and not doing his homework , his mother asked him to stop because he needed to catch up and Mike went outside to do his homework 2. Whilst we were playing hide and seek , we found a tv under a big tree and wondered whose was it and we spent the next few moments analyzing it. 3. Whilst sitting on a swing outside under a tree , I heard my favorite tv show come on and I ran inside to go and watch. 1. Nancy’s mum gave birth to the cutest baby with nice long eyelashes in July 2. In July the weather always becomes hot and stuffy which effects the little baby who becomes fractious and tearful as he sleeps in his cradle for a long time. 3. On the the baby’s one-year birthday which is the 12th of July , an uncle with long legs gives him a robot and many other relatives come with gifts to celebrate his birthday.
Sep 28, 2021 7:03 AM
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Wendy
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English
Learning Language
English