Molly
Today, I was so determined to do all the tasks I had given to myself. I gave myself three tasks: tidy up the shop, teach my children and check their homeworks and speak English all the day. I tried to go to bed early last night and woke early this morning but some how, I failed all the three.
Sep 28, 2021 10:31 AM
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Today, I was so determined to do all the tasks I had given myself. I gave myself three tasks: tidy up the shop, teach my children and check their homework and speak English all day. I tried to go to bed early last night and wake up early this morning but somehow I failed both.
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Sep 28, 2021 10:36 AM
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Molly
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English, French, Japanese, Korean, Vietnamese
Learning Language
Chinese (Mandarin), English, French, Japanese, Korean