Mona
Hi Would you tell me if this paragraph is natural? Being tidy and organized where we live and work can both help people have a circle of core partners and reduce their daily hassles. As a social species, it is essential we be on intimate terms with other people to discuss our sensitive issues. To have such close friendships, we need to exhibit positive attitudes to attract others, and being neat in our workstations and home is one of the ways that we can do to boost our attractiveness. Moreover, people can lessen their daily stressors, such as the anxiety that comes from not finding socks to get to work, simply by being organized and putting everything in its correct position.
Sep 19, 2021 11:56 AM
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Hi Would you tell me if this paragraph is natural? At our homes and work areas, it is good to be tidy and organized. This way, we interact better with our neighbours and our colleagues. As we are socisl beings, we might need to be closer to people to discuss some sensitive issues. To build such rapport, we should dusplay positive attitudes to attract others,. Being neat and tidy can help us. Moreover, people do not need unnecessary stress, such as the anxiety in not finding the socks to go to work. This can be achieved by being organized and putting everything in its proper place.
Sep 19, 2021 12:47 PM
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Mona
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English, Persian (Farsi)
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