Miss Xie
I think the happiness of an individual has little to do with income,the most important thing is how well they are connected with the family and friends. Take my uncle and aunt’s life in the countryside for example, although they earn very little, they lead quite a happy life. First of all, they are very diligent and good at gardening,so they plant lots of vegetables and raise livestocks, they always serve organic and authentic food for the family and friends.In addition, they are very pleased with what they have, so they treasure everything in their life and bring out their best attitudes towards working and life. Last but not least, they are very hospitable and treat their friends very well, especially my aunt, she is an excellent cook and famous for her cooking in our village, many people like her because she is so generous and selfless.
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Sep 19, 2021 3:40 PM
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I think the happiness of an individual has little to do with income. The most important thing is how well they are connected with family and friends. Take my uncle and aunt’s life in the countryside for example. Although they earn very little, they lead quite a happy life. First of all, they are very diligent and good at gardening, so they plant lots of vegetables and raise livestock. They always serve organic food for the family and friends. In addition, they are very pleased with what they have, so they treasure everything in their life and bring out their best attitude towards working and life. Last but not least, they are very hospitable and treat their friends very well, especially my aunt. She is an excellent cook and famous for her cooking in our village. Many people like her because she is so generous and selfless.
Lovely!!! Just remember to separate out your sentences when there are differing ideas.
Sep 20, 2021 6:53 AM
I think the happiness of an individual has little to do with income. The most important thing is how well connected they are with the family and friends. Take my uncle and aunt’s life in the countryside; although they earn very little, they lead quite a happy life. They are very diligent and good at gardening. They plant lots of vegetables and raise livestock. They always serve organic and authentic food for family and friends. In addition, they are very pleased with what they have, so they treasure everything in their life and bring out their best attitudes towards working and life. Last but not least, they are very hospitable and treat their friends very well. Especially my aunt, she is an excellent cook and famous for her cooking in our village. Many people like her because she is so generous and selfless.
I really enjoyed reading this. I agree with your opinion and it made me happy!
Sep 20, 2021 1:53 AM
I think the happiness of an individual has little to do with income; the most important thing is how well they are connected with the family and friends. Take my uncle and aunt’s life in the countryside for example, although they earn very little, they lead quite a happy life. First of all, they are very diligent and good at gardening, so they plant lots of vegetables and raise livestock. They always serve organic and authentic food for family and friends. In addition, they are very pleased with what they have and treasure everything in their life. They always bring out positive attitudes towards working and life. Last but not least, they are very hospitable and treat their friends very well, especially my aunt; she is an excellent cook and famous for her cooking in our village. Many people like her because she is so generous and selfless.
Wow! Great job, you are able to talk about more complex ideas in english, the only mistakes I saw were with punctuation, however, these mistakes are very common, even for native english speakers. Proper punctuation or sentence structure is mainly used in educational or professional writing but is not commonly used in casual texts or comments. I also made a few changes that might help the sentences flow better and become a bit shorter. But overall, what a great story. Your aunt and uncle sound like a wonderful people.
Sep 19, 2021 5:47 PM
I think the happiness of an individual has little to do with income, the most important thing is how well they are connected with their family and friends. Take my uncle and aunt’s life in the countryside for example, although they earn very little, they lead quite a happy life. First of all, they are very diligent and good at gardening, so they plant lots of vegetables and raise livestock. They always serve organic and authentic food for their family and friends. In addition, they are very pleased (or satisfied) with what they have, so they treasure everything in their life and and a good attitude towards life and work. Last but not least, they are very hospitable and treat their friends very well. My aunt especially, she is an excellent cook and famous for her cooking in our village, many people like her because she is so generous and selfless.
Great. Looks like a typical village in China.
Sep 19, 2021 5:35 PM
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Miss Xie
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English, Japanese
Learning Language
English, Japanese