From my house I can see through my window a little piece of the Mediterranean Sea. I’m not exactly by the sea, I mean not first line, because I need to walk for 20 minutes at less from my place. Just

Agustín

From my house I can see through my window a little piece of the Mediterranean Sea. I’m not exactly by the sea, I mean not first line, because I need to walk for 20 minutes at less from my place. Just a short walk, isn’t it? Today is absolutely cloudy, but in a sunny day It’s a magnificent view. During summer time even is easy be able to distinguish people playing different sports on the water such jet skiing, kayaking, or parasailing, and other ones simply sailing.

Jan 20, 2021 1:40 PM

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From my house I can see through my window a little piece of the Mediterranean Sea. I’m not exactly by the sea, I mean not on the seafront because I need to walk for 20 minutes at least from my place. Just a short walk, isn’t it? Today is absolutely cloudy, but on a sunny day It’s a magnificent view. During summer time you can easily distinguish people playing different sports on the water such as jet skiing, kayaking, or parasailing, and others simply sailing.

"I can see through my window" is a fine phrase, quite commonly used

January 24, 2021

Looking out of my window I can see the piece of the Mediterranean Sea. It takes me only about 20 minutes on foot to reach the shore ( the sea, the water). I am sure you would agree it’s not a long walk. Is it? Today, the whole sky is covered with clouds; however, during the sunny days the view from my window it is truly magnificent. During summertime you( one) could look out (of my window and) distinguish between people playing different sports, such as jet skiing, kayaking, parasailing or sailing.

Looking through the window to observe the beach is not idiomatically common. You look through the window ( the glass) to see what is on another side. So for example your friend visits you in your house. You want to show him the view so you tell him: look out ( of) the window. Isn’t the view amazing? Through also means the window is closed. It would not be incorrect to use it, but that’s not what you would read in a book for example or hear on TV. Looking out of the window ( Brit) , looking out the window (AmEnglish) I changed the whole 20 min walking to the beach and question why it’s short. Not sure what was your intention of using a Tag Question here but I kept it. During summer/ in the summer/ in the summertime I put brackets after look out, because as you talk about view from your window in paragraph above , it is not necessary to mention window again. It is clear what you look out of. You look out and you see the view. Distinguish between people who are playing different sports is very specific and bit confusing , my understanding is you want to say that one can tell a difference between people doing various activities. Hope it helps.

January 21, 2021

From my house I can see through my window a little piece of the Mediterranean Sea. I’m not located exactly by the sea, I mean not first line, because I need to walk for about 20 minutes or less from my place. Just a short walk, isn’t it? Today is absolutely cloudy, but in a sunny day. It’s a magnificent view. During summer time even it is easy be able to distinguish people playing different sports on the water such as jet skiing, kayaking, or parasailing, and other ones who simply sailing.

January 20, 2021

From my house I can see through my window a little piece of the Mediterranean Sea. I’m not exactly by the sea, I mean not first line, because I need to walk for 20 minutes at least from my place. Just a short walk, isn’t it? Today is absolutely cloudy, but on a sunny day it’s a magnificent view. During summertime it is even easy to be able to distinguish people playing different sports on the water, such as jet skiing, kayaking, or parasailing, and some are simply sailing.

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January 20, 2021

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