Actually, my fovourite interesting TV Show is “Homeland”. I´m watching it in NETFLIX. Now, I´m going to speak about the argument. The main character is Carry Madison, who is posted in the “CIA”. The

Paula Salmeron

Actually, my fovourite interesting TV Show is “Homeland”. I´m watching it in NETFLIX. Now, I´m going to speak about the argument. The main character is Carry Madison, who is posted in the “CIA”. The “CIA” is very important in United States. There, she works very hard to eliminate the terrorism in some countries. There are 8 seasons, and each season has 12 episodes. For instante, in the first and the second season, Carry Madison must discover and she has to know who is the “Marine” that is a infíltrate terrorist. In others seasons Carry is posted to Irak, Afganistán...to eliminate the terrorism. From my point of view, “Homeland”, is a very interesting serie, because I have known how works the “CIA”

Jan 24, 2021 2:11 PM

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Actually, my fovourite interesting TV Show is “Homeland”. I´m watching it in Netflix. Now, I´m going to speak about the argument. The main character is Carry Madison is posted in the CIA [you needed to finish the main clause - who turns it into a relative clause]. The CIA is very important in the United States. There, she works very hard to eliminate the terrorism in some countries. There are 8 seasons, and each season has 12 episodes. In the first and the second season, Carry Madison must discover [what I've removed is basically just aniyher way to say discover] who the “Marine” is, a infíltrate(?) terrorist. In later seasons, Carry is posted to other countries like Irak and Afganistan to eliminate the terrorism there. I think that Homeland is a very interesting series, because I have learnt how the CIA works.

Very good! To explain: - Netflix is usually spelled in lowercase, with one capital - 'Who is someone' is question order: we would say 'who someone is' in a statement

January 24, 2021

At the moment my favourite TV Show is “Homeland”. I'm watching it on NETFLIX. Now, I´m going to speak about the argument. The main character is Carry Madison, who works under the CIA. The CIA is very important in United States. There she works very hard to eliminate terrorism in some countries. There are 8 seasons and each season has 12 episodes. For instance, in the first and the second season, Carry Madison must discover and know who is the “Marine”, a terrorist who infiltrated the CIA. In others seasons Carry is sent to Irak, Afganistán...to eliminate terrorism. From my point of view “Homeland” is a very interesting series because I have learned how the CIA works

👋👋 great job! A couple of notes: In English, we do not always need the articles, especially for broader concepts like terrorism. You have a couple of sentences that where the sentence structure is Spanish i.e. ...how works the CIA vs how the CIA works. I'm learning Spanish and find the sentence structure a lot more flexible, be wary in English because it can change the meaning quite fast. I hope the edits are helpful! Sí quieres más ayuda, dime, siempre busco por intercambios :)

January 24, 2021

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