Nanami
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This is my today’s night journal and my original one in Japanese. Please correct my writing. Recently, I’d lost focus on my weight loss journey. I consumed more than 1479 kcal today. I’ll buy noodles which have low calories next week. I had a lot of fun today! 最近ダイエットの気が緩んでる。今日は1479カロリーより多く食べた。来週らカロリーの低いヌードルを買おう。今日は楽しかったな!
Jun 7, 2021 3:22 PM
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This is tonight's journal entry and my original one in Japanese. Please correct my writing. Recently, I’ve lost focus on my weight loss journey. I consumed more than 1479 kcal today. I’ll buy noodles next week, which have lower calories. I had a lot of fun today! 最近ダイエットの気が緩んでる。今日は1479カロリーより多く食べた。来週らカロリーの低いヌードルを買おう。今日は楽しかったな!
June 7, 2021
This is my today’s night journal and my original one in Japanese. Please correct my writing. Recently, I’ve lost focus on my weight loss journey. I consumed more than 1479 kcal today. I’ll buy noodles which have low calories next week. I had a lot of fun today! 最近ダイエットの気が緩んでる。今日は1479カロリーより多く食べた。来週らカロリーの低いヌードルを買おう。今日は楽しかったな!
I consumed more than 1479 kcal today can be "Just today I consumed more than 1479 kcal". I prefer putting the timeframe at the beginning and adding "just" for emphasis.
June 7, 2021
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