I have to give a shotrt presentation about " Daring to dream tomorrow". Here is my idea
Hi, my name is Ei. I'm a new student here , so there're not many people I know , but the students make me feel welcome.
So what is your dream? My dream is to become a doctor. I've always wanted to study abroad, especially in Australia or in Singapore. That's why I enrolled on this course. Learning English is time-consuming,but it will definitely stand in good stead in the future. Everyone has their own dream, haven't they ? We have to make a great deal of effort to fulfill our dream. We should set ourselves clear objectives . On condition that we believe in ourselves and have high-esteem , we'll be able to realise our ambitions. If you lack confidence, you'll never be successful in your life.
In summary, if we are to achieve your dream, you have to be patient. Hard work always pay off one day. Just keep on trying and you'll enjoy the fruits of your hard work in the near future. Thank you.
Is that natural?