Improved Version: --- This morning, I cleaned my room before going to my part-time job. It rained again today, but I felt great because I had a good night’s sleep. I hope tomorrow will be even better. Thank you for reading.--- Short Explanations: 1. “I was good” → “I felt good” “Be good” means to behave well. You mean how you felt. 2. “got a lot of sleep” → “had a good night’s sleep” More natural and clear. 3. “It was raining” → “It rained” Both are okay, but “It rained” is simpler for describing the day as a whole.