I prefer to have some changes in my life. I think be in a rut is boring. The world is so big and full of interesting things, we should try something new. We need innovation and products also need inno

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I prefer to have some changes in my life. I think be in a rut is boring. The world is so big and full of interesting things, we should try something new. We need innovation and products also need innovation. That's why I like traveling——we can meet many different people, see a lot of scenery and broaden our knowledge. Sometimes, moving out of our comfort zone may be a better choice.

27 de fev de 2023 15:43

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I prefer to have some changes in my life. I think being stuck doing one thing is boring. The world is so big and full of interesting things, we should try something new. We need innovation. That's why I like traveling——we can meet many different people, see a lot of scenery and broaden our knowledge. Sometimes, moving out of our comfort zone may be a better choice.

This is well written, except when you added the part about products. It doesn't make sense to add this part, but overall good job!

27 de fevereiro de 2023

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