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Recently I start watching a romance drama my friend recommended me. I didn’t thought I would like it so much, but now I can’t stop watching. The story is so sweet and characters are really nice. I wanna see what happen next!
16 de mai de 2025 01:19
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Recently, I start watching a romance drama that my friend recommended to me. I didn’t
think I would like it too much, but now I can’t stop watching. The story is so
sweet and the characters are really nice. I wanna see what happens next!
Good job! I made some revisions. There are many ways to write this.
16 de maio de 2025
Recently I start watching a romance drama my friend recommended me. I didn’t
thought I would like it so much, but now I can’t stop watching. The story is so
sweet and characters are really nice. I wanna see what happen next!
Recently, I started watching a romance drama my friend recommended to me. I didn’t think I would like it so much, but now I can’t stop watching it. The story is so sweet, and the characters are really nice. I want to see what happens next!
16 de maio de 2025
Recently, I started watching a romance drama that my friend recommended to me. I didn’t think I would like it so much, but now I can’t stop watching. The story is so sweet, and the characters are really nice. I wanna see what happens next!
"Recommended to me" is correct, but native English speakers often say: "Recommended me", so that's fine honestly. Overall, it's a great thought, but you could improve "sweet" and "nice" for descriptive language. Sweet how? What makes them nice?
16 de maio de 2025
Recently I started watching a romance drama that my friend recommended to me. I didn’t think I would like it, but now I can’t stop watching it. The story is so sweet and the characters are really nice, too! I want to see what happens next!
16 de maio de 2025
Recently I start watching a romance drama my friend recommended me. I didn’t
think I would like it so much, but now I can’t stop watching. The story is so
sweet and characters are really nice. I wanna see what happens next!
16 de maio de 2025
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Inglês, Japonês
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