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Eduardo Petrini
In my view, parents have the most responsibilities on child's academic development, because if their house is a mess or child don't have enough support and incentive at home, their performance in school most likely woud be affected as well.
16 de ago de 2022 17:57
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In my view, parents have the most influence on a child's academic development. If their house is a mess or their child doesn't have enough support or incentives at home, their performance in school will most likely be affected as well.
16 de agosto de 2022
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In my view, parents have the most responsibility in relation to children's academic development. If their house is a mess or their child don't have enough support and incentive at home, their performance in school will most likely be affected.
I like your text! Be careful about your sentence length, sometimes splitting a long sentence into two sentences can work better in English
16 de agosto de 2022
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Eduardo Petrini
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Inglês, Português
Idioma de aprendizado
Inglês
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