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Leulseged Takele Che
“One of the most irritating things my younger sibling has ever done was throwing one of my expensive items out of the window. At that moment, a chill ran down my spine—I was panicked because the item was so costly that I couldn’t afford to replace it with my current salary. On top of that, I didn’t have a backup, and I needed it for my daily office work.
My wife, who had been quietly watching, suddenly said, ‘Calm down, sweetheart. I know this is upsetting, but I have a solution. I recently received my savings from the office loan program, so we can use that to replace it.’”
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28 de nov de 2024 18:13
Leulseged Takele Che
Habilidades linguísticas
Amárico, Inglês
Idioma de aprendizado
Inglês
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