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Tutor da ComunidadeCould you check this e-mail if it has any grammatical mistakes? I typed this to practice for my writing test.
I had to write this e-mail within a limited time, and I believe it has lots of unnatural expressions.
Dear Mr.Anderson,
In regards to our upcoming meeting, I would like to inform you that we need a projector for the meeting. The room that we are going to use doesn’t have a smart TV, so we need to bring one from the room on the second floor beforehand. Also, I hear that the representetive likes Japanese green tea, so we can purchase some bottled green tea from our catering company. Could you tell me how many people are going to attend the meeting? I would be happy to help you as much as I can to prepare for the meeting.
Regards,
Tanaka
7 de ago de 2024 10:27
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Could you check this e-mail for any grammatical mistakes? I typed this to practice for my writing test.
I had to write this e-mail within a limited time, and I believe it has lots of unnatural expressions.
Dear Mr. Anderson,
With regard to our upcoming meeting, I would like to inform you that we need a projector for the meeting. The room that we are going to use doesn’t have a smart TV, so we need to bring one from the room on the second floor beforehand. Also, I hear that the representative likes Japanese green tea, so we can purchase some bottled green tea from our catering company. Could you tell me how many people are going to attend the meeting? I would be happy to help you as much as I can to prepare for the meeting.
Yours sincerely,
Tanaka
7 de agosto de 2024
Could you check if this e-mail has any grammatical mistakes? I typed this to practice for my writing test.
I had to write this e-mail within a limited time, and I believe it has lots of unnatural expressions.
Dear Mr. Anderson,
In regard to our upcoming meeting, I would like to inform you that we'll need a projector. The room we are planning to use doesn’t have / is not equipped with a smart TV and we don't wish to bring the one from the room on the second floor beforehand. Also, I've been informed that the representative likes Japanese green tea, thus, I'd suggest we purchase some bottled green tea from our caterer. Could you tell me how many people are going to attend the meeting? I will be happy to help you as much as I can to prepare the meeting.
Best/Kind regards,
Tanaka
Be careful not to confuse "In regard of" with "regards" with a "s", which is more a formula usually used to end an e-mail for example (but not the best).
7 de agosto de 2024
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