I think the goal is being able to communicate well, and well enough for the other person to understand what you are saying. I don't think accents are that important, except it comes in the way of you being able to pronounce words correctly. There are different English speaking countries with their own accents, and no one is considered right over the other. I think you did a good job with the pronunciation, I was able to understand you perfectly. Embrace your accent, it's beautiful 🤗.

Your pronunciation is not bad at all, I can understand everything you are saying, and you taught me something new about the Coca-Cola bottle! Keep up the good work🌟

Take out the T and you sound American. Leave the T in talking or in the. Like "What are you talking about" Say "Wha are you talking abou."

👍I heard everything, well done!

Your pronunciation is great! I was able to understand everything you said and I also learned something new today. Thanks!