Encontre Inglês Professores
hibiki
Yesterday, I went to Tokyo Jarmy to study Islam. It was so much fun! I would like to visit again if I have a chance! Then I went to buy clothes and went to karaoke with my friends. It was a very fulfilling day.
24 de mai de 2025 17:56
Correções · 1
Yesterday, I went to Tokyo Jarmy to study Islam. It was so much fun! I would like to visit again if I have a chance! Then I went to buy clothes and went to karaoke with my friends. It was a very fulfilling day.
You could change "then" for "afterwards," - but honestly nothing is grammatically incorrect.
24 de mai de 2025 18:35
Quer progredir mais rápido?
Junte-se a esta comunidade de aprendizagem e experimente exercícios grátis!
hibiki
Habilidades linguísticas
Inglês, Japonês
Idioma de aprendizado
Inglês
Artigos que Você Pode Gostar Também
5 Polite Ways to Say “No” at Work
9 votados positivos · 0 Comentários
Speak More Fluently with This Simple Technique
30 votados positivos · 5 Comentários
How to Read and Understand a Business Contract in English
22 votados positivos · 4 Comentários
Mais artigos