I get along with my pet very well. My pet is a cute little dog. Her name is Nala. I walk with Nala everyday in the morning and also in the afternoon. She loves me very much, I also love her . Well done! And what a cool name for a dog. I think that for cutty you meant "cutie", is that correct? In this case it is better to just put "cute" and it goes before "little", because of the order of adjectives. "and too in the afternoon" is incorrect. "Too" goes at the end, so you'd need to write "and in the afternoon too/as well", or use "also" instead, like in the correction. Remember that in the present simple we put an -s to the 3rd person singular, so it is "she loves".

I get along with my pet very well. My pet is a cute little dog. Her name is Nala. I walk with Nala every day in the morning and also in the afternoon. She loves me very much, I also love her .

I get along with my pet very well. My pet is a cute, little dog. Her name is Nala. I walk with Nala morning and in the afternoon too. She loves me very much, I also love her .