Pesquise entre vários professores de Inglês...
greensan
Today, after English classes at the university, I attended a biology class. Since I have a biology test next Wednesday, I paid closer attention than usual. After that, I went to my part-time job. It was really busy today because there weren’t many crews. Since I also have a psychology test on Saturday,
23 de jul de 2026 11:16
Correções · 2
1
Today, after my English class at university, I attended a biology class. Since I have a biology test next Wednesday, I paid closer attention than usual. After that, I went to my part-time job. It was really busy today because there weren’t many staff members. Since I also have a psychology test on Saturday, I need to study hard this week.
Level: C1.
Your writing is clear and well organised. You describe your school day and work naturally, and your grammar is strong. The only real issue was that the final sentence was incomplete. Apart from that, only one vocabulary choice ("staff members" instead of "crews") needed changing. Excellent work! 😊
23 de jul de 2026 12:36
Today is very hot. I think it is the hottest day of the year. When I go outside, I sweat a lot. So, I will eat a good breakfast because I don’t want to get sick. Today, I have classes from the second period. I also have my part-time job at night. Before my part-time job, I will do my homework. I have a lot of homework, so I want to finish some of it today.
Level: B2+/C1.
Your writing is clear and natural. You can describe your daily plans and explain your reasons well. The grammar is accurate, and the main improvements were related to making a few expressions sound more natural in English. Good job! 😊
23 de jul de 2026 12:35
Quer progredir mais rápido?
Junte-se a esta comunidade de aprendizagem e experimente exercícios grátis!
greensan
Habilidades linguísticas
Inglês, Japonês
Idioma de aprendizado
Inglês
Artigos que Você Pode Gostar Também

What English Schools Don’t Teach
1 votados positivos · 0 Comentários

Binge-Watching Your Way to Fluency: How to Turn Your Favorite Show into Your Secret Language Classroom
2 votados positivos · 0 Comentários

How to Work Effectively with International Teams
11 votados positivos · 2 Comentários
Mais artigos
