Hi everyone! I am Kate, currently I try to do my best to study Chinese) I would be very grateful if someone who is Chinese native speaker can help me to check my grammar. Thank you in advance.
1 长时间看玩儿电脑对眼睛不好。
2 我很喜欢看英国电影。
3 我爸爸每天晚上看电视。
4 我每天给妈妈打电话。
5 你想去日本旅游吗？
6我妹妹跳舞跳得很好。
7 我很喜欢穿漂亮的衣服。
8 我每天晚上下班以后去商店买吃的东西。
9 我弟弟打篮球比我那么好。
10 游动对你的身体很好。

Question

Hi everyone! I am Kate, currently I try to do my best to study Chinese) I would be very grateful if someone who is Chinese native speaker can help me to check my  grammar. Thank you in advance.
1 长时间看玩儿电脑对眼睛不好。
2 我很喜欢看英国电影。
3 我爸爸每天晚上看电视。
4 我每天给妈妈打电话。
5 你想去日本旅游吗？
6我妹妹跳舞跳得很好。
7 我很喜欢穿漂亮的衣服。
8 我每天晚上下班以后去商店买吃的东西。
9 我弟弟打篮球比我那么好。
10 游动对你的身体很好。

Answer

你好Ekaterina。Thaks for the invitation. Here are my corrections：

1 长时间看玩儿电脑对眼睛不好。->
长时间看电脑电脑对眼睛不好。/
长时间玩儿电脑电脑对眼睛不好。
9 我弟弟打篮球比我那么好。->
我弟弟打篮球比我好得多。(My younger brother plays basketball much better than I do.) /
我弟弟打篮球没有我那么好。(My younger brother doesn't play basketball as well as I do.)
10 游动对你的身体很好。->
运动对你的身体很好。

Other sentences are correct.

Answer

Dear Helen, thank you very much!

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