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I have a nuclear family including father, mother, older brother and my wife. My father is in retirement, my mother is near to retirement, my older brother is working in an emergency services department and my wife is working in a private company. I got married in 2018. Then, I moved to a new apartment with my wife since 2018. I started to realise everything has changed. I have to be independent. Moreover, the financial burden is increasing, especially the higher rent we have to pay in every month. Sometimes, I miss my parents so much. When I have time, I will meet my parents and have dinner with them. Now, I want to create a new family after I get promotion on my job. I hope my dream coming true as soon as possible.
12 de nov de 2020 10:33
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I have a mixrd family consisting of my father, mother, older brother and my wife. My father is in retired, my mother is close to retirement, my older brother is working in an emergency services department and my wife is working in a private company. I got married in 2018. Then, I moved to a new apartment with my wife since 2018. I started to realise that everything has changed. I have to be independent. Moreover, the financial burden is increasing, especially with the higher rent we have to pay every month. Sometimes, I miss my parents so much. When I have time, I will meet my parents and have dinner with them. Now, I want to create a new family after I get promotion at my job. I hope my dream comes true as soon as possible.
Hey, congratulations on the marriage, it is a wonderful blessing. There was little to correct, which is a good thing. I hope that your dreams come true and I hope you keep going and commit to trying your best everyday in every area in your life. Nice meeting you.
12 de novembro de 2020
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I have a nuclear family including my father, mother, older brother and my wife. My father is in retirement, my mother is near to retirement, my older brother is working in an emergency services department and my wife is working in a private company. I got married in 2018. Then, I moved to a new apartment with my wife in 2018. I started to realise everything had changed. I had to be independent. Moreover, the financial burden is increasing, especially the higher rent we have to pay every month. Sometimes, I miss my parents so much. When I have time, I will meet my parents and have dinner with them. Now, I want to have a new family after I get a promotion in my job. I hope my dream comes true as soon as possible.
Well done, good writing. I wish you the best of luck in achieving your goals! Jamie (www.italki.com/jamie.teacher)
12 de novembro de 2020
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