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90 day's training: Day 24
Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰
1) I've been sorting out some of my old books to sell for someone who needs. It would be called SDGs.
2) I sometimes hear some abbreviations from English words on TV shows. I think that many Japanese don't know how to say their complete words.
3) According to Google, SDGs is the abbreviation of Sustainable Development Goals.
4) I always use my electric dictionary since 2005. It is almost 20 years old. It is really strong one.
5) I sometimes think about to buy one or not, if my dictionary were broken. I hope it would be not true.
7 de out de 2024 02:07
Correções · 5
"Now that's what you'd call sustainable."のようなことが言えると思います。特にSDGsという略は英語圏では知られていないと思います。なので、説明的に”持続可能な行動”などで表現した方がいいかもしれません。
7 de outubro de 2024
90 day's training: Day 24
Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰
1) I've been sorting out some of my old books to sell to people who need them. It would be called SDGs. (I don't understand this sentence)
2) I sometimes hear abbreviations of English words on TV shows. I think that many Japanese people don't know how to say the complete words.
3) According to Google, SDGs is the abbreviation for Sustainable Development Goals.
4) I always use my electric (???) dictionary since 2005. It is almost 20 years old. It is really good one.
5) I sometimes think about whether to buy another one, if my dictionary were to break. I hope it doesn't happen.
SOMETIMES and SOME are redundant. I've never heard of an elecric dictionary. You might need to explain this or use another term for it.
7 de outubro de 2024
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Kaori
Habilidades linguísticas
Inglês, Alemão, Japonês
Idioma de aprendizado
Inglês, Alemão
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