"In Bataisk, Russia an old woman fell through the floor of the outdoor toilet and sank in the faeces. Apparently the flimsy wooden floor gave way, resulting in a deadly faecal bath for the 57 y.o. According to the journalist Alexander Nevzorov, incidents like that have become common in Russia in recent years, with the number of deaths reaching over a hundred annually." Pretty well written post overall, technically everything was correct but my suggestions make the post more natural and polished. Keep it up man!