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Hello, I feel like I've made a few grammar mistakes. Would you mind correcting this note? :) March 19, 2022. I am dreaming of a vacation. There is only work and chores in my life, no play. It would be good to finally rest. The last time I was on vacation was in 2020. It was a great time, very relaxing. I was at the Polish seaside with my girlfriend and her sister. We rented a cottage and stayed there for ten days.  There are many interesting small towns by the sea to visit. We traveled everywhere by car, but we could also rent bicycles. Last year, I spent a vacation with my family in the countryside. This time was well spent. I had many chores, such as painting the fence and mowing the lawn. I will probably spend the next vacation in the same way as the previous one. I dream of an exotic vacation far from home, but I can't afford it due to my financial situation. I hope that at least I'll be able to go to the mountains for a few days. There are a lot of places I want to visit. Actually, I've never been to a different continent. Europe is beautiful, especially Scandinavia. I'm not the lazy type of person. I don't like sunbathing and lying on the beach drinking mojitos. I love visiting old towns, taking photos and getting to know new cultures. I'm not saying that every interesting trip has to be expensive. Many people travel all over the world with only a little cash with them. I once met a girl who was living this way, out of a suitcase. She came to my city just to do sightseeing. For a moment, I was inspired by her lifestyle, but all my responsibilities brought me back to earth. Life is unfair and many of us can't afford even a short vacation. I'm hoping that it will finally change and that everybody who works hard and honestly will be able to go on a fantastic holiday.
19 de mar de 2022 18:04
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Hello, I feel like I've made a few grammar mistakes. Would you mind correcting this note? :) March 19, 2022. I am dreaming of a vacation. There is only work and chores in my life, no play. It would be good to finally take a break. The last time I was on vacation was in 2020. It was a great time, very relaxing. I was at the Polish seaside with my girlfriend and her sister. We rented a cottage and stayed there for ten days. There are many interesting small towns by the sea to visit. We traveled everywhere by car, but we could also rent bicycles. Last year, I spent a vacation with my family in the countryside. This time was well spent. I had many chores, such as painting the fence and mowing the lawn. I will probably spend the next vacation in the same way as the previous one. I dream of an exotic vacation far from home, but I can't afford it due to my financial situation. I hope that at least I'll be able to go to the mountains for a few days. There are a lot of places I want to visit. I've never been to a different continent. Europe is beautiful, especially Scandinavia. I'm not the lazy type of person. I don't like sunbathing and lying on the beach drinking mojitos. I love visiting old towns, taking photos and getting to know new cultures. I'm not saying that every interesting trip has to be expensive. Many people travel all over the world with only a little cash with them. I once met a girl who was living this way, out of a suitcase. She came to my city just to do sightseeing. For a moment, I was inspired by her lifestyle, but all my responsibilities brought me back to earth. Life is unfair and many of us can't afford even a short vacation. I'm hoping that it will finally change and that everybody who works hard and honestly will be able to go on a fantastic holiday.
20 de março de 2022
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Good work.
19 de março de 2022
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