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Self-help Traveling
More and more people select self-help traveling. But the phenomenon will bring advantages and disadvantages.
First of all, it is revealed that a lot of people think this way could have fun with friends. Where there is self-help traveling, there is happiness. Secondly, it is a very cheap trip for students and going shopping with friends. But every coin has two sides. First and foremost, their parents worry about their kids' safety on a trip. Funthermore. I think that students don't assure themselves of their safety in a hotel. Last but not least, I deemed that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Self-help traveling can exercise a student’s independence.
will
As long as we focus on the bad, we have an unforgettable trip. Only in this way can we have a bright and promising future.
7 de abr de 2022 10:43
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Self-help Traveling
More and more people select self-help traveling. But the phenomenon will bring advantages and disadvantages.
First of all, it is revealed that a lot of people think this way could have fun with friends. Where there is self-help traveling, there is happiness. Secondly, it is a very cheap trip for students and going shopping with friends. But every coin has two sides. First and foremost, their parents worry about their kids' safety on a trip. Funthermore. I think that students don't assure themselves of their safety in a hotel. Last but not least, I deemed that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Self-help traveling can exercise a student’s independence.
will
As long as we focus on the bad, we have an unforgettable trip. Only in this way can we have a bright and promising future.
Hi Linda
I would really like to know what "Self-help travelling" is. Does it mean "self-guided" or independent travel? I have never heard of it. It is difficult to correct your text without knowing what it means.
Victoria
7 de abril de 2022
Self-help Traveling More and more people are choosing self-help traveling. However, this
phenomenon has advantages and disadvantages. First of all, it is revealed
that a lot of people think that travelling this way means they will have more fun with friends. Where there is
self-help traveling, there is happiness. Secondly, it is a very cheap trip for
students and going shopping with friends. But there are two sides to every coin. First
and foremost, their parents worry about their kids' safety on a trip.
Furthermore. I think that students can't be assured of their safety in a
hotel. In conclusion, I believe that the advantages outweigh the
disadvantages. Self-help traveling can exercise a student’s independence.
As long as we focus on the good things, we will have an unforgettable trip. Only in this way
can we have a bright and promising future.
I would call this 'independent travelling'.
7 de abril de 2022
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Linda kids/adults
Habilidades linguísticas
Bielorrusso, Chinês (Mandarim), Inglês, Japonês, Coreano
Idioma de aprendizado
Inglês
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