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Hello. My summer vacation just ended. How have you been?
I made many great memories, such as visiting Nagano, Atami, and Izu. In Nagano, we made lots of memories with BBQ and fireworks. In Atami, we ate Atami pudding and enjoyed retro games. Finally, in Izu, we went to Mt. Amuro. The weather was bad and the fog was thick, but it was incredibly beautiful. Another highlight was winning lots of HUNTER×HUNTER and One Piece figures from crane games. At the end of the vacation, my family in Japan called my brother in France, and he told us about his studies there and how he spends his free time. I'd like to go to France too.
24 de set de 2025 13:59
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Hello. My summer vacation just ended. How have you been?
I made many great memories, such as visiting Nagano, Atami, and Izu. In Nagano, we enjoyed barbecues and fireworks. In Atami, we ate Atami pudding and played retro games. Finally, in Izu, we went to Mt. Amuro. The weather was bad and the fog was thick, but it was still incredibly beautiful.
Another highlight was winning lots of Hunter x Hunter and One Piece figures from crane games. At the end of the vacation, my family in Japan called my brother in France. He told us about his studies there and how he spends his free time. I’d like to go to France too.
“enjoyed barbecues and fireworks” is smoother than “made lots of memories with BBQ and fireworks.” “played retro games” is more natural than “enjoyed retro games.” “it was still incredibly beautiful” is clearer than “it was incredibly beautiful” in this context. “Hunter x Hunter” is the standard way to write the title.
25 de set de 2025 02:38
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