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The weather today was lovely. Another ordinary day at school. Miss Tang told my Mum that my writing homework was not well done,but she didn’t scold me at all, lucky. I need to improve my writing skill for sure. Word for today is bamboo, bamboo is amazing, they were like, there could be a bamboo forest has only one root.
17 de mai de 2021 09:59
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The weather today was lovely. Another ordinary day at school. Miss Tang told my
Mum that I hadn't done my writing homework well, but she (is this your teacher or your mum?) didn’t scold me at all,
lucky. I need to improve my writing skill for sure. My word for today is bamboo,
bamboo is amazing, they (who are 'they') were like, there could be a bamboo forest which has only one
root.
Your writing is great! Be careful that it is clear who pronouns (she, they) refer to.
Scold is a bit of an old-fashioned word. A more normal expression is to tell somone off. You can also use moan or complain.
My mum didn't tell me off.
My mum didn't moan at me.
My mum didn't complain about it.
17 de maio de 2021
1
The weather today was lovely. Another day at school. Miss Tang told my
Mum that my homework was not well done,but she didn’t scold me at all,
lucky. I need to improve my writing skill. Word for today is bamboo,
, they were like, there could be a bamboo forest has only one
root.
17 de maio de 2021
1
The weather today was lovely. Another ordinary day at school. Miss Tang told my
Mum that my writing homework was not done well, but she didn’t scold me at all,
luckily. I need to improve my writing skills for sure. The word for today is bamboo,
bamboo is amazing, there could be a bamboo forest which has only one
root.
17 de maio de 2021
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