Please correct my sentence. I’m planning to buy a house in the capital city of Taiwan. After I checked some information on internet, I found out that house prices are incredibly high. If I bought a house, I would spend most of my salary on my mortgage, and my quality of life would be poor. It is hard to make a decision.

Please correct my sentence. I’m planning to buy a house in Taipei, the heart of Taiwan. I checked some information on the internet and come to realise that house prices are incredibly high now. If I decide to purchase a house, I will be spending most of my salary on repaying mortgage, and my quality of life will deteriorate. It is hard to make a decision... Hope this helps!