It is my practice tonight, please told me if there are mistakes.

The life a routine:
When one is child the days get away so speed! One do not do so much errands, almost everything is done by our fathers while one play, run, cry and smile. This way our routine is simple: get up, brushing our teethes, go to take the breakfast and to use all time free between the breakfast to lunch, playing or watching TV, the same after the lunch till dinner, for at end to sleep.
But soon let's growing and come the school, begin the homeworks and next the tests, till that suddenly already we're young with so homeworks, errands and duties that already doesn't is sufficient the time fo to do everything. It time of to learn planning. Later on, we meet someone girl and begin as to think about girlfriends and that things. It soon the career, a choice very important, and everything seems to increase: respresponsabilities, more agreements, in summary our lives need to take a rest, vacations or time free. But it there isn't enough, in our live there are troubles times, it moments change our routines, even our sleeping time. All life isa routine, a different of others but at the end everybody live someones similarities moments.

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It is my practice tonight, please told me if there are mistakes.

The life a routine:
When one is child the days get away so speed! One do not do so much errands, almost everything is done by our fathers while one play, run, cry and smile. This way our routine is simple: get up, brushing our teethes, go to take the breakfast and to use all time free between the breakfast to lunch, playing or watching TV, the same after the lunch till dinner, for at end to sleep.
But soon let's growing and come the school, begin the homeworks and next the tests, till that suddenly already we're young with so homeworks, errands and duties that already doesn't is sufficient the time fo to do everything. It time of to learn planning. Later on, we meet someone girl and begin as to think about girlfriends and that things. It soon the career, a choice very important, and everything seems to increase: respresponsabilities, more agreements, in summary our lives need to take a rest, vacations or time free. But it there isn't enough, in our live there are troubles times, it moments change our routines, even our sleeping time. All life isa routine, a different of others but at the end everybody live someones similarities moments.

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Life as a Routine:
When one is a child, the days fly by so quickly! We don't have many errands to run; almost everything is taken care of by our parents while we play, run, cry, and smile. This is how our routine is simple: wake up, brush our teeth, have breakfast, and use all the free time between breakfast and lunch to play or watch TV. The same goes for the time after lunch until dinner, and finally, it's time to sleep.

But as we grow up, school comes along, bringing homework and tests. Suddenly, we're young and burdened with so many homework assignments, errands, and duties that there isn't enough time to do everything. It's time to learn how to plan. Later on, we meet girls and start thinking about girlfriends and those kinds of things. And then comes our career, a very important choice, and everything seems to increase: responsibilities, more commitments – in summary, our lives need breaks, vacations, or free time. But even then, it's not always enough. In our lives, there are difficult times, moments that change our routines, even our sleep schedules. All of life is a routine, different from others, but in the end, everyone experiences similar moments.

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