About three years ago, I went to Taiwan on a school trip. It was my first trip abroad. In Taiwan, we went to Jiufen and other places. I ate a lot of delicious Chinese food and had a great time with my friends! I hope to go back when the Coronavirus situation settles down！
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About three years ago, I went to Taiwan on a school trip. It was my first trip abroad. We went to Jiufen and other places. I ate a lot of delicious Chinese food and had a great time with my friends! I hope to go back when the Coronavirus situation settles down!
Good job, Yuma. I want to go visit Taiwan again too :)
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About three years ago, I went to Taiwan on a school trip. I remember it was my first trip abroad. In Taiwan, we went to Jiufen and other places, I ate a lot of delicious Chinese food and had a great time with my friends! I hope to go back when the Coronavirus situation/pandemic settles down！
Good work. Let's hope we can put this pandemic behind us soon.
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About three years ago, I went to Taiwan on a school trip which was my first trip abroad. There, we went to Jiufen and other places. I ate a lot of delicious Chinese food and had a great time with my friends! I hope to go back when the coronavirus situation settles down！
Well written. Try use relative clauses to make your sentences longer. I can show you how to write complex sentences. Your English is good and it is an easy lesson for you. It will help your English develop more. Take care.
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