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B2 Writing Cambridge exam preparation . please correct my writing like in the B2 first exam for schools. I'd love to get feedback. i know i have already chosen a topic but i would like to talk about "Teenagers are too young to teach other people anything" Do you agree? In my opinion teenagers are not too young to teach other people anything, and herr is the reason why i think that. I think we all can learn from anyone it doesnt have to be an older person or your teacher. We can even learn about a baby! All people in the world is different and we don't all have the same way of thinking. I know some people might think that anything they do is the best way to do things or that they are always right. But thats not true, i have never met anyone that has never done any mistake. We are humans and we all make mistakes some of them are more serious than other ones. But maybe for me to drop a cup its nothing and for you means the world. Thats why i think we all can learn from everyone because we all are different and maybe we can adopt better habits from other people. So try to open to other and admit your errors because that is the best way to learn.
27 de jun de 2025 10:40
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B2 Writing Cambridge exam preparation . Please correct my writing like in the B2 first exam for schools. I'd love to get feedback. I know I have already chosen a topic but I would like to talk about "Teenagers are too young to teach other people anything" Do you agree? In my opinion teenagers are not too young to teach other people anything, and here is the reason why i think that. I think we all can learn from anyone; it doesnt have to be an older person or your teacher. We can even learn from a baby! Everyone in the world is different and we don't all have the same way of thinking. I know some people might think that everything they do is the best way to do things or that they are always right. But thats not true, I have never met anyone that has never made any mistakes. We are humans and we all make mistakes, some of them are more serious than other ones. Maybe for me to drop a cup it’s nothing and for you it means the world. Thats why I think we all can learn from everyone because we all are different and maybe we can adopt better habits from other people. So try to be open to others and admit your errors because that is the best way to learn.
This is pretty good but you change from the idea that we can learn from everyone to the best way to learn is to admit your mistakes. You need to stay on topic.
27 de jun de 2025 10:53
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