박희원 Melissa 美丽莎
let's speak together hi i'm lily, i want to learn chinese so i'll post sentences if someone could help and correct me it would be great! you can also post a message in english i'll correct you! 
let's start with:
你好我叫美丽莎。我是法国人你呢。我住在perpignan。我是学生和我一十八岁。
13 de mar de 2009 21:12
Comentários · 4
okay thanks!! it's great that you helped me!!
14 de março de 2009
hi ,lily,my name is Laura.first i want be your friend ,and teach you chinese. Then about you sentences :
你好我叫美丽莎。this one is OK!
我是法国人你呢。if you use a comma between 人and你 it will be better.
我住在perpignan。this one no problem
我是学生和我一十八岁。please change it to two sentences as:我是学生。我十八岁。as i'm a student and i'm eighteen we don't always say together use 和 to put them together. another point for you, we nerver say 一十八岁,we only say 十instead of 一十for oral chinese.but we will say 二十,三十and so on.
在普通话里我们通常只用“我”表示自己,but we have a lot of way say “我”in our dialect . if you don't want see so many "我”in you sentences just leave same of  them out. so your sentences can be say like :你好,我叫美丽莎,是个法国人,你呢?我住在perpignan,是个学生,今年十八岁。
if your want to learn more please contact me. send e-mail to me([email protected])
14 de março de 2009
hi 
i'm kungko from China
i live in hangzhou, it's one of the most beautiful city in China
maybe i can offer some help in your Chinese learning 
and also i want to know more about France (it's really a charming country)
by the way, l love the movie "Amelie" so much
 
14 de março de 2009
sorry i keep saying "我" but i don't know if i could say it in an other way (like in japanese)
13 de março de 2009