Angélica
Tutor da Comunidade
Hi Everyone! Friends all over the world! I want to improve my level of english and also I want to know many people and new friends who speak english and want to learn or practice spanish. For this reason I think it's a great idea to create a group on Whatsapp or skype to practice and share experiences in english and spanish. If you agree with this purpose add me or send me your whatsapp or skype. Preferably, I want to talk with girls because I think it's easier to share experiences with other girls and sometimes people prefer to talk to other people of the same sex. Saludos! :)
1 de ago de 2014 02:23
Comentários · 3
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Very nicely said Angelica. What you wrote was very easy to read and understand. Your English is very good. Cheers...
1 de agosto de 2014
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Your English is really good. I only have a few suggestions: ________ 1. In English, we always capitalize nationalities, including the names of languages. _________ 2. You want to "meet" people or perhaps, "get to know" them. ---------------- 3. You may want to practice a more informal register, so you don't sound like a lawyer (even if you are ;) How about: "If this seems like a fun idea to you, how about adding me on Whatsapp or Skype?" instead of "If you agree with this purpose add me or send me your whatsapp or skype." ___________ 4. It's usual to use "a lot of" instead of "many" when making affirmative statements: "I'd like to meet a lot of people" ___________ Again, congrats, Angélica, and keep up the good work! (I wish you good luck on your conversation group.)
1 de agosto de 2014
haha, really thanks! I'm trying to improve my speaking skills to sounds more natural, so thanks for your helps :)
1 de agosto de 2014