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The invention of the Internet has significantly changed people's lives, which was unthinkable many years ago.
The Internet helps connect people from all around the globe within a nanosecond. In the past, it would take ages for us to send and receive messages from someone, as mailing was the only means of communication back then.
However, thanks to the Internet, we can now send messages and make calls immediately. Moreover, we can even communicate and work with people from different parts of the world without any barriers.
And of course, it is impossible not to mention the recreational and educational values that the Internet brings. People can now learn new skills and pursue online courses from the comfort of their homes. Many people can find useful information and necessary knowledge on the Internet. It saves us a lot of time to search on the websites instead of going to the library and turning every single page of countless books to get what we need.
E-commerce has also flourished, and people can buy and sell products online without leaving their homes.
Overall, the Internet has brought people closer together, and connecting and collaborating globally is easier with it