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Hussein Al_salahi
My last trip was to the sea in November; my college and my friend invited me to visit a niceplacein mountain. The city where she have a house is called taiz, very old and cute town. Taiz was founded by the oldest in the beginning of first century AD. Now it is new area, Taiz it is a children resort from the arabic union time, because this area wes the most sunshine in red sea and with a soft sand. Now, after destroying of arabic Union, this arabic resort was destroyed too. The views of this abandoned boarding houses are very romantic and inspirs me as for artist. However the time is very ruthlessly with these buildings and is killing them, the same time it is creating of art.
30 de mar de 2022 14:19
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My last trip was to the sea in November; my college and my friend invited me to
visit a nice place in the mountains. The city where she has a house is called Taiz,
a very old and cute town. Taiz was founded by the oldest (oldest what?) in the beginning of first
century AD. Now it is a new area, Taiz is a children’s resort from the Arabic
union time, because this area has the most sunshine in the red sea and with soft
sand. Now, after the destroying of the Arabic Union, this Arabic resort has been destroyed
too. The views of these abandoned boarding houses are very romantic and inspires
me as an artist. However, the time is very ruthless with these buildings and
is killing them, but at the same time it is creating art.
Great writing Hussein, you’ve painted a beautiful image with your words.
I’ve corrected a few grammatical errors- let me know if you have any questions!
30 de março de 2022
My last trip was to the sea in November; my college and my friend invited me to visit a niceplacein mountain. The city where she have a house is called taiz, very old and cute town. Taiz was founded by the oldest in the beginning of first century AD. Now it is new area, Taiz it is a children resort from the arabic union time, because this area wes the most sunshine in red sea and with a soft sand. Now, after destroying of arabic Union, this arabic resort was destroyed too. The views of this abandoned boarding houses are very romantic and inspirs me as for artist. However the time is very ruthlessly with these buildings and is killing them, the same time it is creating of art.
do you mean COLEAGUE? COLLEGE is basically the same as university.
31 de março de 2022
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Hussein Al_salahi
Habilidades linguísticas
Árabe, Inglês, Turco
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Inglês
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