When would you go? QingMing festival?

1. “Mom’s been” → “Mom has been” • Both are correct, but “has been” is clearer in writing. 2. “I wasn’t so sure at first, but yeah.” → “I wasn’t so sure at first, but now I think it might be a good idea.” • “Yeah” feels a bit abrupt. Expanding it makes the thought clearer. 3. “We will pass mountain hiking or such.” → “So we’ll skip mountain hiking and similar activities.” • “Pass” isn’t the best verb here. “Skip” is more natural. 4. “Places she likes cool city sites, different interesting resorts, or something like that.” → “Places she likes—cool city spots, interesting resorts, or something along those lines.” • Added a dash for better readability. • “Cool city sites” → “cool city spots” (more natural). • “Different interesting resorts” → “interesting resorts” (redundant to say “different”). 5. “And most importantly, we need to have a private toilet with us. MeeMaw needs it.” → “Most importantly, we need a private toilet with us—MeeMaw needs it.” • Combined the sentences for better flow. 6. “Maybe Mom is right. We do need a caravan.” • Emphasized “do” to add a conversational, reflective tone.