Things that I used to do
When I was a child, I used to play with my brothers all kind of games, we loved playing videogames, hide and seek and I used to play football on the field with my brother and other friends, if outside was rains we would go to the street and we ended up wet, also, there was a park near of the house, we could play every day there and I remembered one day when my brother asked me at the park, have you ever climbed that tree? I climbed that tree, it was too tall and I fell, I hurt my leg and cried a lot. I was so happy when I was a child.
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Things that I used to do
When I was a child, I used to play with my brothers all kind of games, we loved playing videogames, hide and seek and I used to play football on the field with my brother and other friends, if outside was rains we would go to the street and we ended up wet, also, there was a park near of the house, we could play every day there and I remembered one day when my brother asked me at the park, have you ever climbed that tree? I climbed that tree, it was too tall and I fell, I hurt my leg and cried a lot. I was so happy when I was a child.
When I was a child, I used to play all kinds of games with my brothers. We loved playing video games, hide and seek and I used to play football on a field with my brother and some friends. When it rained we would go outside and get wet. There was a park near the house where we would play every day. I remember that one day, when we were in the park, my brother asked me "Have you ever climbed that tree?" I climbed it, it was very tall and I fell and hurt my leg and cried a lot. I had a happy childhood.
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When I was a child, I used to play with my brothers all kinds of games with my brothers. We loved playing video-games, hide and seek, and I used to play football (on the field) with (my brothers and) other friends. If outside was raining, we would intentionally go to the street and we ended up get wet. Also, there was a park near of the a house where we could would play every day. there and I remembered one day at the park when my brother asked me, at the park "Have you ever climbed that tree (before)?" I climbed that the tree, but it was too tall and so I fell. I hurt my leg and cried a lot. However, I was so happy when I was a child.
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Things that I used to do
When I was a child, I used to play all kind of games with my brothers. We loved playing videogames, hide and seek and I used to play football on the field with my brother and other friends, if it was raining outside we would go on to the street and we would up wet, there was also a park near of the house, where we could play every day. there and I remembered one day at the park when my brother asked me "Have you ever climbed that tree?". I climbed the tree, it was very tall and I fell. I hurt my leg and cried a lot. I was so happy when I was a child.
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