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Correct my mistakes please What is equity and equality? First of all I want to give the introduction of the same, equity is nature based concept and It gives fairness and legal right in any litigation or any proceedings of the law. Equity gives or to everyone the entire world equal rights, equal rights don't mean that everyone has equal rights and consistence in any legal proceeding but equity gives equal proportionate right to those who they are needy and equipments for their needs. Those who are more needy will get proper part in any of the requirements and those who are not much needy they will be given moderate amount of or in any aspect of the life , and It gives rights duties, and obligations, equity will be enforced to by the rules of law on us and it is different from common law, common law doesn't provide accurate remedy for any wrong and the person who is doing any wrongful act, intentionally or by mistakenly then the common law doesn't provide rules, regulations and remedies for these kind of acts which if we do so then we will not be provided with by any of the relief. And equality is the concept coined by the Roman law in 1974 and It is translated into 3 languanges, equality provides everybody equal rights and remedies for wrongs they do, concept of equality is applied which is where the law of equity is not applicable, because law of equity provide same and non proportionate right and equal rights, obligations and remedies to all those who whether they are minor, insane, children or old age peoples, they will be provided with by compensations and other goods for their equal rights.

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Correct my mistakes, please.

What is equity and equality?
First of all I want to give the introduction of the same: equity is a natural concept and it points to fairness and legal right in any litigation or legal process. Equity gives to everyone in the entire world equal rights. Equal rights don't mean that everyone has equal rights and consistancy in any legal proceeding but equity gives equal proportionate rights to those who are needy and equips their needs.
Those who are more needy will get a proper part in any of the requirements and those who are less needy will be given a moderate amount of any aspect of the life. And equal rights* confer rights duties, and obligations. Equity will be enforced by law on us and it is different from common law, which does not provide sufficient* remedy for every wrong. For the perpetrator, intentionally or by mistake, the common law does not provide rules, regulations and remedies for their misdeeds. And if we suffer from them we will not be provided with any kind of relief. Equality is a concept coined by the Roman law in 1974 and translated into 3 languanges. Equality provides everybody equal rights and remedies for wrongs they suffer. The concept of equality is applied where the law of equity is not applicable, because the law of equity provides same and non proportionate rights and equal rights, obligations and remedies to all those who whether they be minors, insane, children or the aged, they will be provided with compensation and other goods for their equal rights.

*If I understand you correctly? This was a well written piece much spoiled by one sentence running into the next. Keep your sentences short and these legal ideas and definitions will shine through.
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What is equity and equality?
First of all, I want would like to give the an introduction of the same: equity is a nature-based concept and it gives us fairness and legal rights in any litigation or any proceedings of the law. Equity gives or to everyone the entire world equal rights,. Equal rights don't mean that everyone has equal rights and consistence in any legal proceeding but equity gives an equal proportionate right to those who they are needy and equipments for their needs various resources.
Those who are more needy will get a proper part in any of the requirements and those who are not as much needy they will be given a moderate amount of resources. or in any aspect of the life , and It gives us rights, duties, and obligations. Equity will be enforced on us to by the rules of law on us and. It is different from common law as/because common law doesn't provide an accurate remedy for any wrong act. Also, the common law doesn't provide any rules, regulations and remedies for wrongful acts and for the any person who is doing commiting a wrongful act, intentionally or by mistakenly. then the common law doesn't provide rules, regulations and remedies for these kind of acts which if we do so then we will not be provided with by any of the relief. And
Equality is the concept coined by the Roman law in 1974 and it is has been translated into 3 languanges,. Equality provides everybody equal rights and remedies for the wrongs they do. The concept of equality is applied which is where the law of equity is not applicable, because the law of equity provides the same and non proportionate right and equal rights, obligations and remedies to all those everyone who whether they are even if they are a minor, insane, children or of old age peoples. They will be provided with by compensations and other goods for their equal rights.

Hi Shazia,
Great attempt! I would recommnend that you focus on places where you need you put articles like "the" and sometimes you try to put too many sentences together. Always separate different ideas in different sentences, separating them with periods/fullstops(.).
Other than that, great job! Nice article!

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