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Tomorrow Is a Brighter Day I saw a picture on someone’s micoblog. It shows a card which is written “please help me. I fell down by myself, not be pushed by anyone else and nobody take responsibility for that.” We become cautious when we try to help others. Sometimes trouble will come to us, even our heart are in the right place. We nourished with kind-hearted nature; but with the grown up, we become more and more cold-blood. You can’t blame us for that, because we got parents and children. Who will take care of them if we are blocked in prison? Yes, we could be sentenced to go to jail or fined a lot of money for doing good things. When the day which is sung by Nickleblack sang will truly come. “If everyone cared, nobody cried. If everyone loved, nobody lied. If everyone shared and swallow their pride, we’d see the day when nobody died. I know I am a little disappointed those days for knowing and seeing so much unfair things; however I still hold out that tomorrow is a brighter day.
8 de out de 2011 06:43
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Tomorrow Is a Brighter Day

I saw a picture on someone’s microblog. It shows a card which is written that says “please help me. I fell down by myself, not be pushed by anyone else and nobody take responsibility for that.”  Sorry, I don't understand what the card means, so I can't fix this part.

We become cautious when we try to help others. Sometimes trouble will come to us, even when our hearts are in the right place. We are nourished with by our kind-hearted nature; but with the grown up as we grow up, we become more and more cold-blooded. You can’t blame us for that, because we got have parents and children. Who will take care of them if we are blocked in prison? Yes, we could be sentenced to go to jail or fined a lot of money for doing good things.

When the day which is sung by Nickleblack sang will truly come (not sure what you mean). “If everyone cared, nobody cried. If everyone loved, nobody lied. If everyone shared and swallow their pride, we’d see the day when nobody died.

I know I am a little disappointed those these days for knowing and seeing so much many unfair things; however I still hold out that tomorrow is a brighter day.

10 de outubro de 2011
thanks.
8 de outubro de 2011
做一件好事:Do a good deed
8 de outubro de 2011
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