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Third Entry
This is my third notebook entry. The end of this school year is coming very soon. In school we don't do any work - we're we just watching watch films or planning the plan excursions for next week. I am very very glad about the coming school holidays, in which I'll work because I will work I need to get some money for a Europe-trip with Interrail.
The next few days I am going to enjoy the nice weather at/on on the Chiemsee.
I wish you all a recreative an eventful summer !
There are may ways this could be formatted although I tried to make the most simple corrections without compromising the thoughts you were trying to convey. I hope this is understandable for you.
Here is my version. Compare with Randy's and learn from us :) Enjoy while you can before you are enslaved to the salt mines in an adult's life. So envious! No holiday for me :(
Third Entry
This is my third notebook entry. The end of this school year is coming to an end very soon. In school and so we don't do any work - we're there is no homework but just watching film(s) or planning the excursions for next upcoming weeks. I am very very glad about the coming school is out holidays, in which I'll so that I can earn work because I need to get some money for a Europe trip with on the Interrail.
As for the few next days, I am going to enjoy the nice weather at/on the Chiemsee.
I wish you all a recreative summer of fun!
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