My favorite singer :Stefanie Sun

My favorite singer :Stefanie Sun

Does anybody know her ?

Stefanie Sun is a Singapore singer, a very famous star in Asian.
When I first heard her amazing voice I was 14 years old.The first song I heard is "Tian Hei Hei".She was playing the piano at the MTV. Not very beautiful but So peaceful, I like this moment.
I hear all the albums of her,i Like her voice so much and all her songs, even the ones not in albums.
now,she is a beautiful woman. Even she doesn't often release albums,I still love her.

Can someone correct me? Thanks

My favorite singer : Stefanie Sun

My favorite singer :Stefanie Sun

Does anybody know <strike>her</strike> who she is? (<---this makes it clear that you don't mean 'know her' as a friend)

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When I first heard her<strike> a </strike>amazing voice I was 14 years old. The first song I heard<strike> is</strike> was "Tian Hei Hei".She was playing the piano <strike>at the</strike> on MTV. Not very beautiful but so peaceful, I liked that moment.
I've heard all of her <strike>every</strike> albums. I like her voice so much and all her songs, even the ones not in the albums.
Right now, she is a beautiful woman. Even if she doesn't often release albums, I'll still love her.

Can someone correct me? Thanks

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