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On microblog's story My friend XiXi, she is a optimistic, humorous, friendly girl. When I felt dowm, she always comfort and accompany me to get well. But last night, she sent a message to her microblog, said"Fantasy is always good, but the reality is always cruel, how can i get rid of the gloomy." When I saw this message, I think she must be broke up with her BF. I quickly write a comment, said:"Are you OK, tell me baby how can I help you." after 10 minutes she still didn't set any feedback, then I begain to gave her calls, but she didn't get on the phone. I felt so worrid that i decided to went to her home tomorrow moring. Besides, the other friends were still guessing what wrong with her and leave a lot of comments. The next moring, I received a message, and said" i 'm ok, i just see the movie of Nanjing Massacre, and felt down. But after a night off, I had rivived." Then I said: XiXi, I will kill you later.

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On Microblog's Story

My friend XiXi Xixi, she is an optimistic, humorous, and friendly girl. When I felt feel dowmdown, she always comforts me and accompany keeps me company to get well until I feel better. But last night, she sent a message to her microblog, said saying, "Fantasy is always good, but the reality is always cruel. How can I get rid of the gloomygloom."
When I saw this message, I think thought she must be have broken up with her BF boyfriend. I quickly write wrote a comment, said asking, "Are you OK? Tell me, baby, how I can I help you?" After 10 ten minutes, she still didn't hadn't set given any feedback. Then I begain began to gave call her calls, but she didn't get on answer the phone. I felt so worried that I decided to went go to her home tomorrow the next morning. Besides, the other friends were still guessing what was wrong with her and leaveleaving a lot of comments.
The next morning, I received a message, and it said, "I'm ok. I had just seen the movie of "Nanjing Massacre", and felt I was feeling down. But after a night off, I had have rivived recovered." Then I said, "XiXi Xixi, I will kill you later."

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Nice story :)

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