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A composition I wrote in my diary On Gay Rights Whether or not the gay rights should be defended and consolidated may not be a heated topic in conservative China, but utterly has fuelled buzzing controversy across west countries typified by the liberal US. I am no democrat nor am I republican but I am convinced that any homosexuals are entitled to all due rights and interests that is shared by any other heterosexual person. Love has always been an eternal theme of remarkable novels and resounding blockbuster films, which tell romantic relationships between lovers from different backgrounds, statuses, countries or realms. Nevertheless, when it comes to the same gender, every bit of the tasty on the plate go sour, the homosexual love is seen as not only different but so strange enough to leading to an unfair contract between these lovers and the society as a whole. Suppose you are a young lad but never are allowed to marry your beloved one, you will be desperately locked up in a world of sorrow. In the aforesaid case, marriage is precisely the essential part that constitutes anybody’s rights. So why not gays or lesbians who also have their beloved ones? So as understanding is needed anywhere in the rights of human beings, we, any individuals, have to take the shoes homosexuals are in and understand their voices. In any sense, right of an individual, whether it be gays or men and women, are supposed to be on the agenda of our society.

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A composition I wrote in my diary

On Gay Rights
Whether or not the gay rights should be defended and consolidated may not be a heated topic in conservative China, but has utterly has fuelled buzzing controversy across western countries typified by the liberal US. (note - US is NOT liberal!!! It's VERY conservative :p)
I am no democrat nor am I republican, but I am convinced that any all homosexuals are entitled to all due rights and interests that is shared by any other heterosexual person.
Love has always been an eternal theme of remarkable novels and resounding blockbuster films, which tell of romantic relationships between lovers from different backgrounds, statuses, countries or realms. Nevertheless, when it comes to the same gender, every bit of the tasty on the plate go sour(???), the homosexual love is seen as not only different but so strange enough to leading to an unfair contract between these lovers and the society as a whole.
Suppose you are a young lad but are never are allowed to marry your beloved one, you will be desperately - locked up in a world of sorrow. In the aforesaid case, marriage is precisely the essential part that constitutes everyanybody’s rights. So why not gays or lesbians who also have their beloved ones? So as understanding is needed everyanywhere in the rights of human beings, we, all any individuals, have to take the shoes homosexuals are in and understand their voices (mixed metaphor...).
In any sense, the rights of an individual, whether it be gays  or men and women (gays aren't men or women now??), are supposed to be on the agenda of our society.

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