Ali Khan
The hungry fox Once a fox was very hungry. She went here and there in search of food but could not find any thing and got back hopelessly. But she could not bear hungriness and went again looking for food. On the way suddenly she saw a vine of grapes. Seeing the grapes her mouth began water. She jumped many times for getting grapes but failed to get. At length she got tired and gave up the struggle and disappointedly she said that the grapes were sour , I did not want to eat them.
18 de out de 2012 07:37
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The hungry fox

Once there was a fox who was very hungry. She searched everywhere for food but could not find any thing and went home feeling hopeless. When she could no longer bear her hungriness, she went looking for food again. While she was out, she suddenly saw a grapevine full of grapes. Seeing the grapes made her mouth begin to water. She jumped many times trying to reach the grapes but always fell short. At length she got tired and gave up the struggle. Disappointed, she said "Those grapes are sour, I didn't want to eat them, anyway."

 

 

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20 de outubro de 2012

The hungry fox

Once there was a fox who was very hungry. Once a fox was very hungry. She went She goes here and there(I suggest you use to and fro) in search of for food but has not found anything so went back helpless.could not find any thing and got back hopelessly. But When she could not bear hunger hungriness, she went again lookin(seaching) for food. On the way Suddenly,  on her way, she saw a vine of grapes and the grapes her mouth begans to water. She jumped many times for getting grapes but failed to get.She jumped many times as high as she could to get the grapes but failed. At length Eventually she got tired. Dissapointed; she gave up   struggling to get the grapes then said to herself, "grapes is sour, I don't want to eat it." 

18 de outubro de 2012
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