George's notebook entry: Sep 15, 2010 Watashi wa kanjite me o samashita tsukare to byōki. Tachiagatte, furo ni haitta. Watashi no ha o migaita. Sonogo ryōri o. Isoide tabeta. Fuku o kita. Shigoto ni i

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George's notebook entry: Sep 15, 2010 Watashi wa kanjite me o samashita tsukare to byōki. Tachiagatte, furo ni haitta. Watashi no ha o migaita. Sonogo ryōri o. Isoide tabeta. Fuku o kita. Shigoto ni itta. Jimusho ni okurete kita. Jōshi wa okotte ita. Kare wa watashi o shisseki. Watashi ni kami o ataeta. Honkō de wa," to nobeta mō osoi" Watashi wa dōyō. Jōshi wa watashi o ataeru koto wa shōsan. Sono hi no nokori no watashi wa shigoto. Watashi wa ie ni kaeru tochū de chūshoku o tabeta. Watashi wa kuruma no jiko garējidoa ni unten ni haitta. Dono yōna hidoi hi. I awoke feeling tired and sick. got up and took bath. brushed my teeth. then prepared food. ate in a rush. got dressed. went to work. arrived to office late. the boss was angry. he reprimanded me. gave me a paper. paper said, "no more late" I upset. the boss never give me praise. i work for the rest of day. i ate lunch on the way home. I got into a car accident driving into garage door. what a terrible day.

15 de set de 2010 18:32

Correções · 3

You did a good job, George-san. You could write an essay in Japanese, couldn't you? I think it's amazing! even though there are some expressions you should correct, Keep up studying Japanese!

16 de setembro de 2010

Romaji hurts my head.

16 de setembro de 2010

George's notebook entry: Sep 15, 2010

Watashi wa tsukare to taichou no warusa wo kanjite me wo samashita. Okiagatte furo ni hairi, <strike>Watashi no</strike> ha wo migaita. Sonoato isoide ryōri o <strike>Isoide</strike> tabeta. Fuku o kigaete, shigoto ni itta. Jimusho ni okurete tsuita. Jōshi wa okotte ita. Kare wa watashi o shissekishita. Watashi ni <strike>Honkō de wa</strike>(?) " <strike>to nobeta </strike>mō chikokusuruna" to kakareta kami wo watashita<strike>ataeta</strike>. Watashi wa dōyō shita. Jōshi wa watashi wo kesshite homenai. Watashi wa sono hi <strike>no</strike>ga <strike>nokori no</strike>owari made zutto hartaraitawatashi <strike>wa shigoto</strike>. Watashi wa ie ni kaeru tochū de chūshoku o tabeta. Watashi wa kuruma wo gare-ji ni butsukete simatta.<strike>no jiko garējidoa ni unten ni haitta</strike>. <strike>Dono yōna </strike>Nante hidoi hi da.
I awoke feeling tired and sick.
got up and took bath.
brushed my teeth.
then prepared food.
ate in a rush.
got dressed.
went to work.
arrived to office late.
the boss was angry.
he reprimanded me.
gave me a paper.
paper said, "no more late"
I upset.
the boss never give me praise.
i work for the rest of day.
i ate lunch on the way home.
I got into a car accident driving into garage door.
what a terrible day.

Not too bad.
Keep ot up^^

16 de setembro de 2010

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