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What are Some Social Problems?
Many social problems affect every society even in great-industrialized countries. In my country our lives are greatly influenced by some of them such as illiteracy, street crime, and unemployment…
What are the social issues in your countries? How is government trying to solve them? If you think your government is ineffective; what are your suggestions for addressing some of these issues?
***Disclaimer***
This is how I would have written this piece. I am not a grammer teacher so please forgive my poor use of it.
The number one problem in my country, USA, is unemployment.
What are Some Social Problems?
There are many social problems in a society. Not affect every society even great and industrialised countries can escape from its effects. In my country, we also living some of them such as have illiteracy, street crime, unemployment…
What are the social issues do you have in your country? [It is more polite to say it in this way.] How the does your government trying plan to solve them? How would you suggest a better solution if you think that they are government may persist in trying to solve them in wrongheaded or ineffective ways, what do you suggest for resolving or decreasing some of these issues going about the wrong or ineffective way?
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