Thank you for your help

On today's landing front page of this web site I found a friend who can help me change correct my the compositions.  I'm very happy this let me to meet know someone to who can help me,let me have a better power to  improve my ability to learn English.  I went want to say the world is very beautiful.  There are a lot of people with good intentions. I will try my best to learn English because I have a dream to fulfill.  I hope that more friends will be able to help me. Thank you very much.

Good job, nice to see you trying to make long sentences.  It can be very tough, especially with certain words.  I assume you meant italki's front page.  This could be called a few different things, but that is how I hear it described mostly.   Just like a newspaper.  

Thank you for your help

Today's after landing in a site,i had found a friend, who helps me in changing the composition, I'm very happy, this let inspires me know someone to help me someone, let me have a better power strong will to learn English.I went want to say the that word world is very beautiful, there are  lot people with of good intention. I will try my best to learn English will,because I have a dream.so I hope that more friends will help me ,thank you very mach much.

Thank you for your help

Today's landing site found a friend help me change the composition page on this site helped me find a friend to help with my compositions (did you mean: notebook entries?) ,I'm very happy,this let me know someone to help me,let me have a better power to learn English as this lets me know someone can help mean learn English better.I went want to say the word world (世界？）is very beautiful,there are a lot of good intentions. I will try my best to learn English will,because I have a dream.so So I hope that more friends will help me ,thank you very mach much.

Minor spelling mistakes but the vocabulary is good. All you need is a bit more structure in your sentences.

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